Well the rhyme is good but the flow is off. Id certainly advise you revise. My recommendation:
Such beautiful eyes Such tasteful lips the greatest surpsie and erotic hips I'll be your lover I'll be your friend we'll lie under these covers until the end.
by altering the poem the syllables flow and the rhythm isn't disrupted at the 5th line. Though I understand about wanting repetition, and if thats the goal then by all means keep the poem as it is because repetition is a tool for making a point. Also if the language use of "most" as though it is the absolute best is a point that is trying to be made keep it as well. But to me flow of a poem is vital.