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The perfect smile
The coolest walk
The sweetest style
The smoothest talk
Such beautiful eyes
Such tasteful lips
The greatest surprise
And erotic hips
I'll be your lover
I'll be your friend
We'll lie under these covers
Until the end
I wrote this while in English C class :aww:
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shehrozeameen Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Its a sweet poem.
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Serbeena Feb 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Heh, thanks ^^
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shehrozeameen Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome
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Fa-la-lala Jan 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Oooo! I like this!!:) Check out my poems if you wish!
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Serbeena Jan 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I will ^^ Thank you!
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XBloodyNightmaresX Oct 26, 2012  Student General Artist
That is so beautiful! I dont think i could write anything like that xD
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CarmineDevian Oct 25, 2012  Student Writer
thats awesome again
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Serbeena Oct 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks! ^^
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CarmineDevian Oct 26, 2012  Student Writer
Its really is beautiful, good job
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Serbeena Oct 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you very much :aww:
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