Slowly creeping behind the trees Loving the scent of your fear Ever so quiet Near you at all times Driving your paranoia Even further Right into hysterics Mysterious And frightening Near you... and always watching you...
This is beautiful! Oh and one thing I'd like a lot. You could write one with longer verses and without the underlined first letter. Maybe random as hell. Maybe creepy. Maybe funny. Maybe completely freaking insane. But no underlining the letters.
I think it would give it that awesome "HOLY SHIT!" moment
Oh, if I drew and wrote down things for every being that fascinated me...those boring white walls of my bedroom would be a lot more interesting. Well, I suppose you could always take a picture of your desk and submit it?